Wow, I just read one, Ruby And The Wolf, it’s really good stuff! Maybe you can give more details about the characters, you know, what does Ruby look like for example i.e , her mother?, grandmother? , etc. How do they sound? How does it make Ruby feel? I’m not criticizing, just trying to help a fellow writer. Sometimes it helps to have another set of eyes to help with new ideas 🙂 My writing is all over the place and my friends point out things all the time. Everyone has blind spots, me more than most! 🤣